Solidifying Transitions

Making whatever you are writing flow well is important so readers can understand what you are trying to say. Transitions are the key to clarity. Adding a few words or even passages can connect the gaps so readers can follow the story. There are several types of transitions. Consider the ones below, and use one or two that suit your manuscript.

1. Date and Location Headings
Writing the specific date or location at the beginning of a scene or chapter keeps the time straight. It also eliminates your need to include that information elsewhere in the section. This technique is most effective in works that span many years or that often bounce between times and locations.

2. Orientation Words
A few words to indicate time and space is a simple transition technique. A small addition like “Two days later” or “Late the next night” will remind readers of where they are in the story.

3. Third-Person Narration
A form of third-person narration can fill in details to connect the scenes. Even a couple of sentences can be enough to keep the reader informed.

4. Inner Thoughts
If writing in first-person narrative, let readers into the character’s head. Write some of the character’s inner thoughts to explain a situation.

5. New Scene or Chapter
If there is a big gap of information, a new scene or chapter may be necessary. Often this is the case with plot-driven stories, memoirs, biographies, or histories. The trick with this type of transition is finding the right place for such a large addition. An editor can help you find a good spot and identify what exactly you should insert, be it more dialogue or a different perspective that reveals another character’s point of view on a situation.

Keep in mind that a strictly linear sequence of events can be dull and that transitions can be small changes or additions. Don’t make the work overly repetitious. And remember that contacting an editor is always a good idea if you are stumped or want feedback.